Baranar's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Buttsky at Work]

Well done.

I liked the art style and simplicity of the setting. The idea is very straightforward as well. However, my only gripe is when the clown kills himself. It doesn't seem obvious what he kills himself with since it happens quickly and then the flash ends right after. Were it somewhat slower and more obvious what he was killing himself with, I wouldn't have any problems with it. Otherwise, everything else is, to me, fine as it is.

Otto responds:

Definitely right; I got quite lazy at the end and hoped maybe it would be clear enough but adding another camera shot, like when he put his book down, made that four hours I had left to sleep seem like heaven haha.

Thanks for the review :0

[Cigarettes Kill]

Not great.

The art was decent, but that's all that was good. The text was too fast (although I read it all), it wasn't humorous at all, and the vulgar words didn't add to it. You should try to do frame-by-frame animation so the animation is smoother and looks realistic. If you put more effort into it, I believe you could make something worth while. Until then, you can always keep trying!

Lindsayboi responds:

LOL, it was a frame-by-frame animation, I juss havent got a graphics tablet so i cant do brilliant art right now, thanks for the tips btw

[World Of The Line: Snake]

I see the point of your flashes!

And I like them! There's no plot, but the fact you wander away from other ideas is what makes me think of this as a good idea.

GlueyMcGee responds:

Thanks!
finally someone who doesn't say or think "su should put characters in this" or "maybe make a storyline"

[-Lone Soldier-]

ORIGINAL!

You scored huge because original stories rock. Are you going to continue with a small filesize or put more into the next one? 'Cause that was impressive.

AltairTheAssassin responds:

i'm gona put more in the next one this was a little test to see if people liked it.

[Dumbledore is Gay]

"erecty dicky!"

LOL! child rapist and pedophile. and he wants to have sex with snape, now thats just fucking hilarious.

RSQViper responds:

Thanks for the kind words. I liked how the short story presented itself. =)